2011-12-10
Renhai Reflections: Day's End
Day's End
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)
all her trinkets stored
in the closed jewel box —
the music stops /gc
a wrench, bolts, and a spare tire /vs
the lamplight casting shadows /gc
second performance —
the understudy receives
a louder applause /vs
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5 comments:
another fine effort
john
Intriguing connections.
Thanks John, Bill!
that first stanza makes me think of my almost 103 year old aunt. She still takes her ear rings off an stores them in her little box.
Pamela: Thanks. Wow 103... blessings on her!
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