by Masago: Rengay #47 (Jul 20-26, 2008) Summary
Out of Sight
A gray cloud
drifts into the dirt —
rain puddle.
A new neighbour moves in —
the gopher pops down its hole.
Cuckoo, cuckoo —
stillness returns to this
hot afternoon.
Clock tower —
the big hand passes over
the little hand.
Totem pole at dusk —
the moon slips behind.
Sky reflections —
our paddles sweep away
the big dipper.
The central theme in this rengay is "Disappearing".
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8 comments:
I really liked this one!
me too
john
Me too!:)
I've come to this a little late to play the guessing game, but a great series. My favourites were the reflection ones - I have a soft spot for them. I also really like the clock one - sort of like a momentary handshake. We see it happen everyday but don't notice. Thankyou for bringing it to my attention.
this must be one of my favourites thus far
Thank you all for you kind comments.
why is it always so obvious once you announce the theme. I'm sure I always make it more difficult.
Pamela: :-) Thanks!
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