2008-01-16

Rengay Through the Seasons #20 [1-4]

by Masago: Rengay #20 (Jan 13-19, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 5)

Snowflakes / on a branch... it dips / a bit more.
Family dinner — garlic salt / on a stick of celery.
Athletic club — another gulp before / pressing thirty.
Siphoned gas — on the way back the can / grows heavier.


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6 comments:

floots said...

that's as good a representation of conscience as i'v ever read
nice one vaughn

Borut said...

Physical work? I'm not good at it... But I'll work it out!?:)

John McDonald said...

nice
john

Aurora Antonovic said...

Ditto Floots.

polona said...

i like it although i can't explain why.

Masago said...

Floots: You've again spotted a deeper insight. Thanks.

Borut: Ha, ha!

John: Thanks.

Aurora: Thank you.

Polona: Your kind words are encouraging. Thanks.