2008-01-23

Rengay Through the Seasons #21 [1-4]

by Toshiaki Koike (tk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #21 (Jan 20-26, 2008) Verses 1-4 (of 6):


Icy Road — a plastic bag rolls, right, left. /tk
A tangled cassette tape — an end flaps in the chill. /vs
Revolving door — cold and warm air / briefly touch. /tk
Frost patterns / form on the window pane — finger print. /vs


[When someone leaves a finger print on a window (e.g. house, car), the frost when it gets quite cold out will form a pattern that reveals the finger print that was previously invisible.]

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

7 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

that captures coldness so well!

floots said...

i'm really enjoying the sense of transience and permanence captured in these pieces
thank you both

Borut said...

Oh, didn't know that. No 'ice flowers' as we call them, on window panes this year... Just dark blue pansies in the garden...!?:)

John McDonald said...

very good
john

polona said...

who's the culprit? ;-)

haiku-shelf said...

it was a pleasure to read this rengay!

Masago said...

Andrew: Thank you.

Floots: Thanks.

Borut: :-) ...or maybe you're wearing the grin.

John: Thanks.

Polona: Hmmm, better call on Scotland yard. :-)

Haiku-Shelf: Thank you.