by Masago: Rengay #31 (Mar 30 - Apr 5, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
Poking out / in snow left under a tree — snowdrops. /bk
Angel food cake — sixteen candles aflame. /vs
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2008-03-31
2008-03-30
Rengay Through the Seasons #31 [1]
by Betty Kaplan (bk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #31 (Mar 30 - Apr 5, 2008) Verses 1 (of 6):
Poking out / in snow left under a tree — snowdrops. /bk
[Snowdrops are flowers which are among the first bulbs to bloom in spring.]
This rengay was written with Betty Kaplan who is now retired from the Fashion Industry. She used to arrange clothes, now she arranges words. Betty started writing haiku in the early 1990's. Haiku changed her life. She has been published in Frogpond, Lynx, Woodpecker, South by Southeast, World Haiku Review, Sketchbook, American Tanka , Simply Haiku and CHO.
I first read Betty's work in Sketchbook where she has written many rengay with Max Verhart:
http://poetrywriting.org/
I was drawn to the freshness and creativity of these rengay and in June, 2007 I had the pleasure of writing a rengay with Betty (it ended up supporting 4 themes):
http://tinyurl.com/yoyo85
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Rengay #31 (Mar 30 - Apr 5, 2008) Verses 1 (of 6):
Poking out / in snow left under a tree — snowdrops. /bk
[Snowdrops are flowers which are among the first bulbs to bloom in spring.]
This rengay was written with Betty Kaplan who is now retired from the Fashion Industry. She used to arrange clothes, now she arranges words. Betty started writing haiku in the early 1990's. Haiku changed her life. She has been published in Frogpond, Lynx, Woodpecker, South by Southeast, World Haiku Review, Sketchbook, American Tanka , Simply Haiku and CHO.
I first read Betty's work in Sketchbook where she has written many rengay with Max Verhart:
http://poetrywriting.org/
I was drawn to the freshness and creativity of these rengay and in June, 2007 I had the pleasure of writing a rengay with Betty (it ended up supporting 4 themes):
http://tinyurl.com/yoyo85
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
2008-03-29
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 Summary
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008) Summary
Vacant Seat
Patch of daffodils —
the old John Deere parked
by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair —
the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set —
a vacant seat sways
back and forth.
The kite's tail
hangs from a branch —
spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back —
one "occupied" light is off.
The backhouse door
lies on the ground — a squirrel
sits atop the roof.
The central theme in this rengay is "Unoccupied". A secondary theme of "Seat-related" also worked out: Tractor seat, Rocking chair, Swing's seat, Kite's tail (tale), and Facilities (airplane & backhouse).
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http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uAIIjRHrMjreg&gid=0
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Vacant Seat
Patch of daffodils —
the old John Deere parked
by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair —
the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set —
a vacant seat sways
back and forth.
The kite's tail
hangs from a branch —
spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back —
one "occupied" light is off.
The backhouse door
lies on the ground — a squirrel
sits atop the roof.
The central theme in this rengay is "Unoccupied". A secondary theme of "Seat-related" also worked out: Tractor seat, Rocking chair, Swing's seat, Kite's tail (tale), and Facilities (airplane & backhouse).
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uAIIjRHrMjreg&gid=0
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2008-03-28
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 [1-6]
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back — one "occupied" light is off.
The backhouse door / lies on the ground — a squirrel / sits atop the roof.
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Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back — one "occupied" light is off.
The backhouse door / lies on the ground — a squirrel / sits atop the roof.
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2008-03-27
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 [1-5]
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back — one "occupied" light is off.
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back — one "occupied" light is off.
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2008-03-26
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 [1-4]
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
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Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
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2008-03-25
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 [1-3]
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
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Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
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2008-03-24
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 [1-2]
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
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Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
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2008-03-23
Rengay Through the Seasons #30 [1]
by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verse 1 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
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Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
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2008-03-22
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 Summary
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008) Summary
Summer's Hose
A layer of ice
forms on the old sleigh —
spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose
still lying as it was.
Two straws
in an empty glass —
French Café.
New car on-line —
the web page accepts my
credit card.
We go for a spin —
my wallet stays at home.
The lawyer arrives
to work out the details...
estate will.
The central theme in this rengay is "Left There": Sleigh in the yard, Hose in the yard, Straws in a glass, Credit card number at a website, Wallet at home, Will left ahead.
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uB6h0if6wF0IA&gid=0
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Summer's Hose
A layer of ice
forms on the old sleigh —
spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose
still lying as it was.
Two straws
in an empty glass —
French Café.
New car on-line —
the web page accepts my
credit card.
We go for a spin —
my wallet stays at home.
The lawyer arrives
to work out the details...
estate will.
The central theme in this rengay is "Left There": Sleigh in the yard, Hose in the yard, Straws in a glass, Credit card number at a website, Wallet at home, Will left ahead.
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uB6h0if6wF0IA&gid=0
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2008-03-21
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 [1-6]
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
New car on-line — the web page accepts my / credit card.
We go for a spin — my wallet stays at home.
The lawyer arrives / to work out the details... estate will.
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
New car on-line — the web page accepts my / credit card.
We go for a spin — my wallet stays at home.
The lawyer arrives / to work out the details... estate will.
2008-03-20
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 [1-5]
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
New car on-line — the web page accepts my / credit card.
We go for a spin — my wallet stays at home.
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A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
New car on-line — the web page accepts my / credit card.
We go for a spin — my wallet stays at home.
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2008-03-19
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 [1-4]
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
New car on-line — the web page accepts my / credit card.
[It is a little unusual to buy a car over the Internet. It has a relatively high price and most buyers like to physically "kick the tires". However, I've heard some folks that have bought a car on-line.]
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A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
New car on-line — the web page accepts my / credit card.
[It is a little unusual to buy a car over the Internet. It has a relatively high price and most buyers like to physically "kick the tires". However, I've heard some folks that have bought a car on-line.]
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2008-03-18
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 [1-3]
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
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A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
Two straws / in an empty glass — French Café.
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2008-03-17
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 [1-2]
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
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A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
Patio: summer's hose / still lying as it was.
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2008-03-16
Rengay Through the Seasons #29 [1]
by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008), Verse 1 (of 6)
A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
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A layer of ice l forms on the old sleigh — spring rain.
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2008-03-15
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 Summary
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008) Summary
Low Tide
Longer days —
toys begin to emerge
from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells
and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty —
each morning's combing,
more forehead.
Opening bell —
trading starts lower
yet again.
Spring fashion sale —
in my size, gone!
Sinking sun —
the last rays glimmer
on the tree tops.
Some have pointed out that this rengay touches on the change of seasons, our own mortality, and a negative, entropic sense. The actual theme I had in mind was the idea of "receding" (snow, tide, hairline, stocks, clothes, daylight). And, when you think about it, receding is obviously at the root of these other interpretations.
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http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uB54Rw96obkAg&gid=0
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Low Tide
Longer days —
toys begin to emerge
from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells
and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty —
each morning's combing,
more forehead.
Opening bell —
trading starts lower
yet again.
Spring fashion sale —
in my size, gone!
Sinking sun —
the last rays glimmer
on the tree tops.
Some have pointed out that this rengay touches on the change of seasons, our own mortality, and a negative, entropic sense. The actual theme I had in mind was the idea of "receding" (snow, tide, hairline, stocks, clothes, daylight). And, when you think about it, receding is obviously at the root of these other interpretations.
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uB54Rw96obkAg&gid=0
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2008-03-14
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1-6]
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
Opening bell — trading starts lower / yet again.
Spring fashion sale — in my size, gone!
Sinking sun — the last rays glimmer / on the tree tops.
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Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
Opening bell — trading starts lower / yet again.
Spring fashion sale — in my size, gone!
Sinking sun — the last rays glimmer / on the tree tops.
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2008-03-13
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1-5]
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
Opening bell — trading starts lower / yet again.
Spring fashion sale — in my size, gone!
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Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
Opening bell — trading starts lower / yet again.
Spring fashion sale — in my size, gone!
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2008-03-12
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1-4]
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
Opening bell — trading starts lower / yet again.
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Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
Opening bell — trading starts lower / yet again.
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2008-03-11
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1-3]
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
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Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.
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2008-03-10
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1-2]
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
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Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
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2008-03-09
Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1]
by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verse 1 (of 6)
Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
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Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
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2008-03-08
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 Summary
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008) Summary
Instant Replay
March flurries —
snowflakes on my hand,
just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan
of his first love letter.
Flight home —
back then it was by train
for three days.
Riding the subway —
I listen to a Beatles album
on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game —
a cell-phone instant replay.
Late winter
skiing trip — each run
still a thrill.
The first and last verses of this rengay reference the theme of "Then & Now" the same way but from different perspectives. In the first verse the snowflakes falling on the hand at the end of winter are viewed differently than when snowflakes fell on the same hand at the beginning of the winter. In the last verse the level of joy for skiing has not declined over the course of the winter.
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http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uBgctLITTfjOA&gid=0
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Instant Replay
March flurries —
snowflakes on my hand,
just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan
of his first love letter.
Flight home —
back then it was by train
for three days.
Riding the subway —
I listen to a Beatles album
on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game —
a cell-phone instant replay.
Late winter
skiing trip — each run
still a thrill.
The first and last verses of this rengay reference the theme of "Then & Now" the same way but from different perspectives. In the first verse the snowflakes falling on the hand at the end of winter are viewed differently than when snowflakes fell on the same hand at the beginning of the winter. In the last verse the level of joy for skiing has not declined over the course of the winter.
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uBgctLITTfjOA&gid=0
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2008-03-07
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 [1-6]
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game — a cell-phone instant replay.
Late winter skiing trip — each run / still a thrill.
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March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game — a cell-phone instant replay.
Late winter skiing trip — each run / still a thrill.
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2008-03-06
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 [1-5]
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game — a cell-phone instant replay.
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March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
Old-timers hockey game — a cell-phone instant replay.
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2008-03-05
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 [1-4]
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
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March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
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2008-03-04
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 [1-3]
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
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March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
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2008-03-03
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 [1-2]
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
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March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
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2008-03-02
Rengay Through the Seasons #27 [1]
by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verse 1 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
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March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
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2008-03-01
Rengay Through the Seasons #26 Summary
by Jon Davey (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #26 (Feb 24 - Mar 1, 2008) Summary
Breaking the Ice
Hail storm —
sparrow and sparrowhawk
sheltered in a blackthorn. /jd
A pine-log alpine hut —
four skis against a wall. /vs
Mountain lake —
a pair of swimmers
break the ice. /jd
Class reunion —
a childhood crush says
he remembers me. /vs
Family party — I forget
my third cousin's name. /jd
Frozen clearing —
the howls of a wolf pack
under a full moon.
The central theme in this rengay is "Togetherness".
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uCs0jJdIer3Fg&gid=0
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Rengay #26 (Feb 24 - Mar 1, 2008) Summary
Breaking the Ice
Hail storm —
sparrow and sparrowhawk
sheltered in a blackthorn. /jd
A pine-log alpine hut —
four skis against a wall. /vs
Mountain lake —
a pair of swimmers
break the ice. /jd
Class reunion —
a childhood crush says
he remembers me. /vs
Family party — I forget
my third cousin's name. /jd
Frozen clearing —
the howls of a wolf pack
under a full moon.
The central theme in this rengay is "Togetherness".
Please click here for link details and other notes:
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=pcytHc47X3uCs0jJdIer3Fg&gid=0
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
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