Rengay Through the Seasons #28 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #28 (Mar 9-15, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

Longer days — toys begin to emerge / from the snow.
We scour the beach for shells / and trinkets — low tide.
Past forty — each morning's combing, more forehead.

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

yes! I know this so well. :)

floots said...

hair today - gone tomorrow :)

John McDonald said...

had to laugh out loud

jem said...

These are great. That sense of slow revelation. What was always there becoming obvious. But there is a possible negativity in each too, for me at least. The clean snow, plain sand and full head of hair hold some appeal that the revealed interrupts.

polona said...

entropy rules ok

Masago said...

Andrew: :-)

Floots: *LOL*

John: :-)

Jem: Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful insights.

Polona: Relentlessly.