Rengay Through the Seasons #29 Summary

by Masago: Rengay #29 (Mar 16-22, 2008) Summary

Summer's Hose

A layer of ice
forms on the old sleigh —
spring rain.

Patio: summer's hose
still lying as it was.

Two straws
in an empty glass —
French Café.

New car on-line —
the web page accepts my
credit card.

We go for a spin —
my wallet stays at home.

The lawyer arrives
to work out the details...
estate will.

The central theme in this rengay is "Left There": Sleigh in the yard, Hose in the yard, Straws in a glass, Credit card number at a website, Wallet at home, Will left ahead.

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wonderful work!!
"The lawyer arrives" - reminds me of my past. :)

John McDonald said...

good one

polona said...


well done again. the rengay as a whole tells quite a story

Bill said...

This is unusually affecting, Vaughn.

Masago said...

Andrew: Thank you so much. :-)

John: Thanks, John.

Polona: Many thanks.

Bill: Appreciate the kind words.

Pamela said...

I found it very poignant.

(My word verification was "tllen"... and I guess that describes your rengay, too. It was very telling!"

Pat Paulk said...

Vaughn I missed that credit card #, could you type that again.

Masago said...

Pamela: Thanks. What is "ttlen"?

Pat: Try, 4505-555-555-555.