Rengay Through the Seasons #38 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #37 (May 18-24, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

Moon light — the cherry blossoms glow / bright pink.
The night light still on — yet the kids are grown up.
A lava lamp / from the flea market — comes on, goes off.
A lit butt / tossed out a car window — rolling, flickering.
A molten glass blob — shaped with each puff.
Sip of rosé / by a fireplace of embers — just you and me.

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

much nicer than the last. :)

Janice Thomson said...

Ah yes this is lovely.

John McDonald said...

very cosy very nice

polona said...

yes, there's a very nice feel to this one.
light is the obvious theme, but there's more... how to word it... transformation?

Masago said...

Andrew: :-)

Janice: Thank you.

John: Thanks.

Polona: Thank you muchly; I hadn't seen that but now that you mention it, I can feel that in some of the verses.