Rengay Through the Seasons #35 [1-5]

by John McDonald (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #35 (Apr 27 - May 3, 2008) Verses 1-5 (of 6):

First day out / learning to be a rabbit — tree-bark scattered. /jm
New postal job — he opens / a gate with "Beware of Dog".
The young mother / gives the infant her breast — the crying stops.
Erupting curses — the rookie mason nearly / hits his chisel.
Another wrong note — she bangs the keyboard.

Click here for the previous rengay in the series.


Janice Thomson said...

I'm getting new experience coupled with frustration. Will see how the last one ties in. I sure like this form.

Borut said...

Hm, makes me think: Sometimes, it may be wise for an angry lion to learn to be a rabbit!?:)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"Another wrong note —
she bangs the keyboard."
I've heard this many times! :)

polona said...

ah, failing to grasp things properly can sure be frustrating.

Masago said...

Janice: Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you are enjoying this.

Borut: LOL

Andrew: Yes, I'm sure you have! :-)

Polona: I know this all too well. :-)