by John McDonald (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #35 (Apr 27 - May 3, 2008) Verses 1-5 (of 6):
First day out / learning to be a rabbit — tree-bark scattered. /jm
New postal job — he opens / a gate with "Beware of Dog".
The young mother / gives the infant her breast — the crying stops.
Erupting curses — the rookie mason nearly / hits his chisel.
Another wrong note — she bangs the keyboard.
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5 comments:
I'm getting new experience coupled with frustration. Will see how the last one ties in. I sure like this form.
Hm, makes me think: Sometimes, it may be wise for an angry lion to learn to be a rabbit!?:)
"Another wrong note —
she bangs the keyboard."
I've heard this many times! :)
ah, failing to grasp things properly can sure be frustrating.
Janice: Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you are enjoying this.
Borut: LOL
Andrew: Yes, I'm sure you have! :-)
Polona: I know this all too well. :-)
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