2008-05-01

Rengay Through the Seasons #35 [1-5]

by John McDonald (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #35 (Apr 27 - May 3, 2008) Verses 1-5 (of 6):


First day out / learning to be a rabbit — tree-bark scattered. /jm
New postal job — he opens / a gate with "Beware of Dog".
The young mother / gives the infant her breast — the crying stops.
Erupting curses — the rookie mason nearly / hits his chisel.
Another wrong note — she bangs the keyboard.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

5 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

I'm getting new experience coupled with frustration. Will see how the last one ties in. I sure like this form.

Borut said...

Hm, makes me think: Sometimes, it may be wise for an angry lion to learn to be a rabbit!?:)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"Another wrong note —
she bangs the keyboard."
I've heard this many times! :)

polona said...

ah, failing to grasp things properly can sure be frustrating.

Masago said...

Janice: Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you are enjoying this.

Borut: LOL

Andrew: Yes, I'm sure you have! :-)

Polona: I know this all too well. :-)