Rengay Through the Seasons #35 [1-4]

by John McDonald (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #35 (Apr 27 - May 3, 2008) Verses 1-4 (of 6):

First day out / learning to be a rabbit — tree-bark scattered. /jm
New postal job — he opens / a gate with "Beware of Dog".
The young mother / gives the infant her breast — the crying stops.
Erupting curses — the rookie mason nearly / hits his chisel.

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I don't know what had ne miss this new one! wonderful work!

jem said...

Joining this one a little late, but loving it. Its a very lively one, full of laughs along side the pitfalls.

'learning to be a rabbit' is a phrase so full of warmth. And the chisel one reminds me of my dad.

polona said...

yikes! this one makes me laugh and feel sorry for the guy at the same time

Masago said...

Andrew: Thanks!

Jem: Thank you for you kind comments.

Polona: :-)