by Masago: Rengay #33 (Apr 13-19, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Foot traffic — a dandelion sprout / in a tiny crack.
These new shoes — my feet / sue for a prompt return.
Passing car — a bit of her dress caught / in the door.
A large man / squeezes in between us — long bus ride.
Plastic bottle of mustard — the supper silence broken.
Bottle of Merlot — the corkscrew leaves half / the cork behind.
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3 comments:
bwaa ha ha haa.. you got me with the mustard bottle spluttering,
... I'm giggling.
i hate picking those tiny bits of cork from my wine :)
too tight is never good
Pamela: :-) *giggle*
Polona: I hate that too. Too loose isn't so good either. ;-)
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