by Masago: Rengay #34 (Apr 20-26, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
Glacier in the lake — a splash is seen, before / it is heard.
A breaking-up rumour started — we just now find out.
A tulip petal / falls to the floor — the baby / has a taste.
Dark chocolate / between the lips — she bites / a little chunk.
He releases the bowling ball... the left pin wobbles, falls.
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Well, several senses brought into play and an underlying suggestion of anticipation, of what is not yet.
But this would be just a game if the images were not often striking in themselves.
"Dark chocolate
between the lips — she bites
a little chunk."
my favorite part! Wish I had some! :)
ah, that's a nice feeling :-)
Bill: Your kind words are appreciated!
Andrew: Now you're making go out and get some. :-)
Polona: :-)
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