Rengay Through the Seasons #34 Summary

by Masago: Rengay #34 (Apr 20-26, 2008) Summary

Between the Lips

Glacier in the lake —
a splash is seen, before
it is heard.

A breaking-up rumour started —
we just now find out.

A tulip petal
falls to the floor — the baby
has a taste.

Dark chocolate
between the lips — she bites
a little chunk.

He releases the bowling ball...
the left pin wobbles, falls.

A wet cardboard box —
one kick almost sends a piece
across the puddle.

The central theme in this rengay is "Break apart/away".

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J. Andrew Lockhart said...

It's funny that once you explain the whole thing it is so clear. :)

Borut said...

I like the wobbling pin image in particular!?:)

polona said...

aha :)

Pamela said...

I agree with Lockhard. I read them and try to figure out the bend... and
then you tell us and I wonder why I tried so hard.

Masago said...

Andrew: Hey, that sounds like a theme. :-)

Borut: Thanks. Some days I feel like that. :-)

Polona: Thanks.

Pamela: LOL, I suppose I should make them a little more obvious(?).