by Masago: Rengay #34 (Apr 20-26, 2008) Summary
Between the Lips
Glacier in the lake —
a splash is seen, before
it is heard.
A breaking-up rumour started —
we just now find out.
A tulip petal
falls to the floor — the baby
has a taste.
Dark chocolate
between the lips — she bites
a little chunk.
He releases the bowling ball...
the left pin wobbles, falls.
A wet cardboard box —
one kick almost sends a piece
across the puddle.
The central theme in this rengay is "Break apart/away".
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4 comments:
It's funny that once you explain the whole thing it is so clear. :)
I like the wobbling pin image in particular!?:)
I agree with Lockhard. I read them and try to figure out the bend... and
then you tell us and I wonder why I tried so hard.
Andrew: Hey, that sounds like a theme. :-)
Borut: Thanks. Some days I feel like that. :-)
Polona: Thanks.
Pamela: LOL, I suppose I should make them a little more obvious(?).
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