by Gary Gay (gg) and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #48 (Aug 24-30, 2008) Verses 1-4 (of 6):
Summer thunder — fireflies blink among / the tall corn. /gg
Corndogs in each hand — we wade through the crowd. /vs
From the top / of the ferris wheel — so many stars. /gg
Up-turned bike — a ladybug on a spoke / of the spinning wheel. /vs
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7 comments:
"spinning" makes me think there was a wreck?
love it
john
These are spectacular - reeking of summer!
gone for a ride?
love the ambiguity...
Yes a couple ways to take this. Love the image of the ladybug! This one is intriguing Vaughn...
Andrew: Uh, right. :-) I had actually written it based on the image of the wheel spinning in the breeze (e.g. a child threw it down on the ground as he/she ran in the house for supper).
John: Thanks.
GZ: Thank you!
Polona: Yes, or returning from one. :-)
Janice: Thank you!
Our beautiful life on this planet Earth!?:) Seen through a vertigo!?:)
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