2009-09-25

Renhai Reflections 139: Bright and Loud


Bright and Loud

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Reflected in eyes,
the wild, electric dance
between the clouds. /zh.r

Cracking, crashing booms... /vs
Sounds muffled under the bed... /zh.r

A sudden flash
spreads across the harbour -
town lights darken. /vs

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9 comments:

John McDonald said...

lovely monochromatic picture
john

Gillena Cox said...

a thread of excitement runs from verse to verse

much love
gillena

Janice Thomson said...

Having been struck by lightning a number of times in a 747 above Toronto these verses take on a strong imagery for me - I can almost feel the lightning again :)

Pamela said...

I'm giving you a standing ovation on this one!!!

This streaked right off the screen and into my head.

Kristin Riggs said...

The first one is my favorite...literally gave me chills. I LOVE thunderstorms...so exciting. My heart beats a little faster everytime I see those thunder clouds roll in. Bravo...these are fantastic! :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice picture

Devika said...

Some really lively ones here....full of light, and sound....don't know why these make me want to hear some music! :)

good, enjoyable sets Masago, Gillena and Zhanna :)

wishes,
devika

RBroeker said...

Powerful. I like the middle part a lot: I can hear the scene.

Best wishes
Ralf

Masago said...

Thanks Everyone!