2009-11-16

Renhai Reflections 146: On the Way


On the Way

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Slowly letting go —
the greeting card slips into
the tiny slot /gc

Two friends embrace in the street, /gc
their puppies tangle leashes. /vs

Fish food sprinkles —
the guppies dart up to meet
the sinking bits. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0185.htm

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

good one again
john

Kristin Riggs said...

Love this!!! The first one makes me think of the times when I've sent a letter or email that was difficult to write...those ones you hang on to forever and debate about whether or not you should send. The second you let go of it or click "send" your heart jumps and you wish you could take it back. Am I the only one who has ever experienced that? :)

RBroeker said...

First time that I found all the links without reading the authors background-information. There is a lot of ease and depth in this set. I like it very much.

Best wishes
Ralf

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Bill said...

If Gillena's 3-liner stands alone, its meaning changes dramatically.