2009-11-04

Renhai Reflections 145: Awakening Talent


Awakening Talent

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

School buzzer —
I'm the last one left
to leave the room. /vs

In a semi dream state, /gc
I hit the snooze button. /vs

Chalk on the black board
taking a line for a long walk —
creative art class. /gc

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0184.htm

[Be sure to read the notes for comments about the third verse.]

8 comments:

Devika said...

This sets sounds familiar, Gillena and Masago :)

Taking a line for a walk -- never knew that was a technique for little artists.....but then, i do it on the computer...when i am free, learning....but it isn't going any far! :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

immediately thought of Klee
good one you two
john

Kristin Riggs said...

Wonderful! I can relate to the second one for sure... :)

RBroeker said...

Nice work! Unfortunately the Klee-link didn't work on my pc.

Best wishes
Ralf

Pat Paulk said...

Vaughn glad to see you're still at it. Have taken many a line for a long walk and ended up tripping over the period.

Bill said...

The Klee quotation is most effectively placed.

Devika said...

Its been a while....came for new :)

Hope all is well Masago,

wishes,
devika

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Devika, I'm okay, working on several renhai, hopefully will have something to post here soon.