2009-10-28

Renhai Reflections 144: Junior Achievement


Junior Achievement

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Seward (js)

Baby steps —
hands above the head,
lifted high. /vs & js

Little fingers at the keys — /vs & js
coloured sticky on the page. /vs & js

School theatre —
each student steps forward
for the encore bow. /vs & js

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10 comments:

Devika said...

Yes, better we look at and learn from children....start with their achievements :)

Good, enjoyable set, Janice and Masago :)

wishes,
devika

Kristin Riggs said...

All of the images make my heart smile...and ache a little because I am so hoping to add to my little family very soon. Each one if beautifully done! How I love little fingers and faces! :)

John McDonald said...

delightful
john

RBroeker said...

Great. I love the third part very much.

Best wishes
Ralf

Pamela said...

perfect

真秀 said...

It:s been a long time since i:ve been on the site.

I have been enjoying you poetry. I especially like the tag team with other authors. It reminds me of the tale a Genji, when nobles would play games coming up with poetry on the fly. It looks like great fun!

Keep up the good work!

Matt

Bill said...

Very nice. Difficult to avoid cuteness or sentimentality with this subject, but you've done it.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

being a music teacher, I love this! :)

Masago said...

Thank you everyone!

Pat Paulk said...

You can't beat the kids. As Bill commented y'all avoided sentimentality, but still evoked sentiment. Great stuff!!