2009-10-21

Renhai Reflections 143: Onward


Onward

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Leaving a trail
of joyous songs behind —
the bride's veil /gc

Two at the breakfast table — /vs
last night's left overs, day moon. /gc

Cruise ship deck —
a pair of seagulls follow
above the wake. /vs

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8 comments:

Devika said...

Good set, Masago and Gillena :)

was interesting to read the way it linked :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

well done both of you
john

Bill said...

Nice work, you two.

RBroeker said...

Seems so simple, is so deep. A good work, Gillena and Vaughn.

Best wishes
Ralf

paulaesperanto said...

Ĝi plaĉas al mi. Ĝi estas romantika.

I like it. It’s romantic.

get zapped said...

The first and last one really grabbed me. Nice team work!

Dalloway said...

well done

Masago said...

Thank you all!