2009-10-21

Renhai Reflections 143: Onward


Onward

A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Leaving a trail
of joyous songs behind —
the bride's veil /gc

Two at the breakfast table — /vs
last night's left overs, day moon. /gc

Cruise ship deck —
a pair of seagulls follow
above the wake. /vs

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9 comments:

Devika said...

Good set, Masago and Gillena :)

was interesting to read the way it linked :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

well done both of you
john

Bill said...

Nice work, you two.

RBroeker said...

Seems so simple, is so deep. A good work, Gillena and Vaughn.

Best wishes
Ralf

paulaesperanto said...

Ĝi plaĉas al mi. Ĝi estas romantika.

I like it. It’s romantic.

get zapped said...

The first and last one really grabbed me. Nice team work!

Dalloway said...

well done

Masago said...

Thank you all!

voyance en ligne email said...

L ook… here I am I have tried out things in the same manner as you described and guess what!!! I have been successful in taking up the challenge and fulfilling the endeavor finally!!! There cannot be anything better than this.