2009-10-21
Renhai Reflections 143: Onward
Onward
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Leaving a trail
of joyous songs behind —
the bride's veil /gc
Two at the breakfast table — /vs
last night's left overs, day moon. /gc
Cruise ship deck —
a pair of seagulls follow
above the wake. /vs
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9 comments:
Good set, Masago and Gillena :)
was interesting to read the way it linked :)
wishes,
devika
well done both of you
john
Nice work, you two.
Seems so simple, is so deep. A good work, Gillena and Vaughn.
Best wishes
Ralf
Ĝi plaĉas al mi. Ĝi estas romantika.
I like it. It’s romantic.
The first and last one really grabbed me. Nice team work!
well done
Thank you all!
L ook… here I am I have tried out things in the same manner as you described and guess what!!! I have been successful in taking up the challenge and fulfilling the endeavor finally!!! There cannot be anything better than this.
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