2009-10-06

Renhai Reflections 141: First Day


First Day

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Dressed and ready,
out the door: everything
seems new. /zh.r

A book snuggled in her arms — /vs
the school bus pulls away. /zh.r

The passed note,
tucked deep between
the last pages. /vs

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0180.htm

8 comments:

Devika said...

I like these, Masago and Zhanna :)

First and second -- I am reminded of those school days....the last, ofcourse can be read in more ways than one,

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

perfect picture
john

Janice Thomson said...

Very evocative of one's youth. Good work you two.

Gillena Cox said...

nice one, brings back pleasant memories

Kristin Riggs said...

As a teacher, I truly love these!

Pamela said...

memories of so long ago

Masago said...

Thanks all!

RBroeker said...

That makes me think about a time years ago. And soon to be seen when our daughter ... well, you know.

Best wishes
Ralf