2009-11-21

Renhai Reflections 147: Stepping Back


Stepping Back

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj)

A waning crescent
in the long dim corridor —
shuffling footfalls. /vj

Barber's shop window — /vs
a glance back in time. /vj

Shoe-shiner's chair —
on the tip of my shoe,
the overhead light. /vs

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8 comments:

RBroeker said...

Great accustic sceneries in the first (c) and the third verse (a/b). The whole set: delightful, indeed.

Best wishes
Ralf

Kristin Riggs said...

I simply love the crescent moon...and it keeps showing up in so many poets' work tonight. Makes me smile! :) Lovely set.

Devika said...

Nice sets Masago...this and the previous,

had read them and enjoyed -- but couldn't comment here :)

wishes,
devika

Bill said...

Love that last image.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

like Bill, I really like the ending. Hope all is o.k. with you.

John McDonald said...

great stuff as usual vaughn
john

真秀 said...

I'm really enjoying the Renhai. I will have to find someone to practice with.

I enjoy how the poems branch in two images bound together so simply.

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Andrew, all is well but very busy with many things. Thanks.

Thepoolofzen: If would like to write one, let me know and we can do than.