2009-11-21
Renhai Reflections 147: Stepping Back
Stepping Back
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj)
A waning crescent
in the long dim corridor —
shuffling footfalls. /vj
Barber's shop window — /vs
a glance back in time. /vj
Shoe-shiner's chair —
on the tip of my shoe,
the overhead light. /vs
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8 comments:
Great accustic sceneries in the first (c) and the third verse (a/b). The whole set: delightful, indeed.
Best wishes
Ralf
I simply love the crescent moon...and it keeps showing up in so many poets' work tonight. Makes me smile! :) Lovely set.
Nice sets Masago...this and the previous,
had read them and enjoyed -- but couldn't comment here :)
wishes,
devika
Love that last image.
like Bill, I really like the ending. Hope all is o.k. with you.
great stuff as usual vaughn
john
I'm really enjoying the Renhai. I will have to find someone to practice with.
I enjoy how the poems branch in two images bound together so simply.
Thank you all!
Andrew, all is well but very busy with many things. Thanks.
Thepoolofzen: If would like to write one, let me know and we can do than.
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