2010-03-28

Renhai Reflections 179: Faintly Conducted


Faintly Conducted

A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

river park
wearing a snow hood
muted hush... /tk

raising his dark shades... /vs
somewhere, faint breathing /tk

March wedding...
this moment before the groom
lifts the veil /vs

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6 comments:

John McDonald said...

love it
john

RBroeker said...

A lot of words with double meanings, sequences with many layers and ways to be read. Not easy to read, but worth it!

Best wishes
Ralf

Kristin Riggs said...

Terrific, Vaughn!!!

Gillena Cox said...

Verse 3 is breathtaking leaves me wanting more; a beautiful collab

much love
gillena

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I thank God I can still pick an apple off my tree and eat it on the spot without having to worry about chemicals.