2010-04-25
Renhai Reflections 181: Limit Encounters
Limit Encounters
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)
From the edge
a fly descends into
the peanut butter. /vs
Cycling the canyon rim — /jm
a squirrel crosses the bridge. /vs
The clothes line
naked but for three pins —
landing finch. /jm
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8 comments:
Sparkling.
some really creative shifts; i like each verse individually and i enjoyed the poem in its entirety;
much love
gillena
yes lovely lively events
john
Thank you all!
Very vivid! And one day I will see the link from peanut butter to squirrel ...
Best wishes
Ralf
Ralf: ah... Peanut butter & squirrel: 1) squirrels and small rodents love to eat nuts including peanuts; 2) In Canada we had a brand of peanut butter called "Squirrel". :-)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Squirrel_%28peanut_butter%29
Thanks for that explanation, Vaughn!
Best wishes
Ralf
I really love this post I will visit again to read your post in a very short time and I hope you will make more posts like this.
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