2010-07-18

Renhai Reflections: A Winner Emerges


A Winner Emerges

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)

Some neighbourhood boys
join in for their world-cup match —
the ball, off a head. /vs

One, two, then three pigeons land — /vs
flying home, team Germany. /gc

Cooing from the eaves —
the TV screen filled with
Soccer City. /gc

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0233.htm

7 comments:

Devika said...

Good enjoyable sets, Masago and Gillena :)

whatever one may say, team Germany definitely played a good game :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

good one
john

Janice Thomson said...

Didn't watch the games but enjoyed the renhai :)

Gillena Cox said...

Dev
Germany Spain and Japan where my team fourites in this WC2010

much love
gillena

Devika said...

Okay Gillena :)

wishes,
devika

Ralf Bröker said...

Well, a hard story for me (but Spain was the better team in the half-final). And of course I have say that Germany played the little final after that (so they flew home home just in a figurative sense).

Anyway: this is one of the few good soccer poems; too many of them just mirrored the result.

Best wishes
Ralf

voyance serieuse gratuite said...

Thank you for this nice post ... and smiling (for no obvious subject)!