2011-01-22
Renhai Reflections: Breaking Comfort
Breaking Comfort
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)
The young operator
flicks a cigarette butt
into the traffic. /jm
Tire tracks in the fresh snow — /vs
a grader's exhaust plume. /jm
I spread honey
on the scraped burned toast —
steaming coffee. /vs
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5 comments:
Good sets, Masago and Jerry...had to think how the title works for the set :)
wishes,
devika
liked this very much
john
Very good.
Some of the less welcome smells of life (well...except for the smell of coffee!). Much enjoyed renhai.
Thank you all!
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