2011-01-22

Renhai Reflections: Breaking Comfort


Breaking Comfort

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)

The young operator
flicks a cigarette butt
into the traffic. /jm

Tire tracks in the fresh snow — /vs
a grader's exhaust plume. /jm

I spread honey
on the scraped burned toast —
steaming coffee. /vs

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6 comments:

Devika said...

Good sets, Masago and Jerry...had to think how the title works for the set :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

liked this very much
john

Bill said...

Very good.

Janice Thomson said...

Some of the less welcome smells of life (well...except for the smell of coffee!). Much enjoyed renhai.

Masago said...

Thank you all!

voyance par mail gratuite said...

Thank you for the good advice ... it's very nice to read you ... ..and ...... instructive.