2011-01-22
Renhai Reflections: Breaking Comfort
Breaking Comfort
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)
The young operator
flicks a cigarette butt
into the traffic. /jm
Tire tracks in the fresh snow — /vs
a grader's exhaust plume. /jm
I spread honey
on the scraped burned toast —
steaming coffee. /vs
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7 comments:
Good sets, Masago and Jerry...had to think how the title works for the set :)
wishes,
devika
liked this very much
john
Very good.
Some of the less welcome smells of life (well...except for the smell of coffee!). Much enjoyed renhai.
Thank you all!
Thank you for the good advice ... it's very nice to read you ... ..and ...... instructive.
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