away for a few days...
23 hours ago
2011-02-26
Renhai Reflections: Flashback
Flashback
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
Scotch on the rocks —
the slow cruise last summer
up to Alaska. /vs
Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
another laugh line appears. /jt
His arms around her
as they ferry cross the lake —
yesterday's sun-dog. /jt
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4 comments:
Nice work.
yes nice work
john
Thanks Bill & John!
I still really like your verse Vaughn - for some reason it made me think of Neil Diamonds Love on the Rocks from the Jazz Singer...
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