2011-02-26

Renhai Reflections: Flashback


Flashback

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Scotch on the rocks —
the slow cruise last summer
up to Alaska. /vs

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
another laugh line appears. /jt

His arms around her
as they ferry cross the lake —
yesterday's sun-dog. /jt

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5 comments:

Bill said...

Nice work.

John McDonald said...

yes nice work
john

Masago said...

Thanks Bill & John!

Janice Thomson said...

I still really like your verse Vaughn - for some reason it made me think of Neil Diamonds Love on the Rocks from the Jazz Singer...

voyance en ligne said...

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