2011-03-05
Renhai Reflections: Well Done
Well Done
A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
the weekend party —
I exchange views with the town's
theatre critic /vs
the aroma of white tea — /gc
words of Dickens between sips /vs
shy the applause —
rises to a tremendous
standing ovation /gc
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0263.htm
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7 comments:
Good additions here, Masago , Gillena, Janice and all :)
in this especially liked the Middle one -- a nice collaboration :)
wishes,
devika
enjoyed this
john
I have experienced these situation quite a few times ... and your fine teamwork brought back this feeling of surrealism I had in the beginning. Thank you very much.
Best wishes
Ralf
I too really like the middle verse - it leaves such a delightful impression - well done you two.
The parts link together most effectively.
Thank you all very much!
Thank you very much for this nice discovery.
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