by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 15-21, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
A hermit watches / drops splash on the surface — koi's pond.
Out in an evening drizzle — we stop for fish and chips.
Potato patch — the sound of pitter-patter / on each leaf.
Sudden downpour — colouring books opened / on the lawn.
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7 comments:
It's amazing when you stop to think about the different kinds of rain and its sounds.
I like this - I can see the colors run into each other.
The books one just has to see!?:)
love it
john
I truly enjoy the sounds... brings a lot of nice memories, thanks
funy, but my first thought was, 'what a waste!'
but you painted a beautiful scene
Janice: Yes, thank you.
Andrew: Thanks. Not a nice sight when it was your own colouring books.
Borut: Absolutely.
John: Thanks.
Ričardas: Thank You!
Polona: I agree. Thanks mucho.
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