by Masago: Rengay #43 (Jun 22-28, 2008) Summary
End Game
Long day —
the sun goes to bed
after I do.
We get ice-cream cones —
a lick sends my scoop flying.
Rising tide —
a wave laps over the last
of the castle.
A sudden squall —
an outdoor chess match
enters the end game.
At the end of the dock —
he tries hooking minnows.
Awakened at dawn —
the sound of sirens grab
my attention.
The central theme in this rengay is "Endings".
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9 comments:
This was a really good one!
I would correct you. They are not just endings, they are great endings :)
Yes, I really liked this one too!
Mmm good one. Now that you have revealed the theme, they take a good second reading. Endings really do come in all shapes and sizes.
enjoyed this one... the theme became obvious when janice pointed it out :)
end of the dock
summer moonlight
all the way across
Andrew: Thank you!
Ričardas: Thank you kindly.
Janice: Many thanks.
Jem: Yes they, thanks.
Polona: :-) Thanks.
Bill: Ah, yes, moonlight doesn't get any better than in the summer across the lake.
Attention-grabbing end of the game!:)
Borut: I was just glad it did drive up to our house. :-)
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