by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 15-21, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
A hermit watches / drops splash on the surface — koi's pond.
Out in an evening drizzle — we stop for fish and chips.
Potato patch — the sound of pitter-patter / on each leaf.
Sudden downpour — colouring books opened / on the lawn.
Thunderstorm — my umbrella / opens up all too well.
A rainbow across / the road in front of us — the storm behind.
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8 comments:
opening my umbrella
as the raindrops start
you take my arm
lovely
john
it`s a joy to read your poetic work!
best wishes,
Angelika
a fitting conclusion to a wet rengay :)
I can smell the rain.......
the story of life
Yes the ending is perfect - we need more rainbows.
Bill: Nice.
John: Thanks.
HS: Thank you.
Polona: Thank you; indeed wet it is (appropriate for what the folks in the mid-West US have/are going through).
Pamela: bingo!
Andrew: Yes, well done.
Janice: Thank you, we certainly do.
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