by Masago: Rengay #27 (Mar 2-8, 2008), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
March flurries — snowflakes on my hand, just not the same.
An e-mail from her — a scan / of his first love letter.
Flight home — back then it was by train / for three days.
Riding the subway — I listen to a Beatles album / on my iPod.
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7 comments:
I can't live without my iPod! :)
I don't have an iPod.
sound move :)
interesting sequence so far
john
I'm joining this one a little late, but I love the shape its taking. Links between past and present, the changes versus the things that stay the same.
i'm with jem on this one :)
Andrew: Modern luxuries often drift into being necessities, eh?
Pamela: Actually, I have one but seldom use it (I'm almost never walking around where it would used; when I'm sitting down I'm either at the computer, writing haiku, or reading). :-)
Floots: Aye!
John: Thanks.
Jem: Thank you. You observations are very perceptive. :-)
Polona: :-) Thanks.
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