by Masago: Rengay #30 (Mar 23-29, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Patch of daffodils — the old John Deere parked / by a collapsed barn.
Empty rocking chair — the cat naps undisturbed.
Swing set — a vacant seat sways / back and forth.
The kite's tail / hangs from a branch — spring drizzle.
She rushes to the back — one "occupied" light is off.
The backhouse door / lies on the ground — a squirrel / sits atop the roof.
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5 comments:
life goes on but the past leaves footprints
i really felt close to this series
thank you
I've seen the events in each of these verses..
nice set
john
deserted, but not lifeless...
Floots: So true. Thank you.
Pamela: :-) Thanks.
John: Many thanks.
Polona: That's another way of stating the central theme. Thanks.
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