2008-05-16

Rengay Through the Seasons #37 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay #37 (May 11-17, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)

First mowing — I find a dog's gift / in the lawn.
2nd birthday — she gets / a furry white kitten.
He misses again / another anniversary... third degree.
The Prof's lecture / on the fourth dimension... she forgets the time.
On his graduation — a CD of Beethoven's 5th.
Gifted composer — each note found as if / by a sixth sense.


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6 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

This was a delightful series and I'm thinking "gifts" is the main theme as well as numbers.
'The Prof's lecture
on the fourth dimension...
she forgets the time.' - I very much like this.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this is in my language :)

Borut said...

Truly multi-dimensional!:)

John McDonald said...

yes a good series
john

polona said...

increasing numbers are obvious but there's also a sense of time... and of course gifts

Masago said...

Janice: You have correctly identified the two major themes. Thank you.

Andrew: Now that you mention it, this rengay was tailor written for you!

Borut: Yes, thank you.

John: Thanks.

Polona: Very good. I hadn't spotted the time theme (I have just added it to the worksheet). Thank you very much!