by Masago: Rengay #37 (May 11-17, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
First mowing — I find a dog's gift / in the lawn.
2nd birthday — she gets / a furry white kitten.
He misses again / another anniversary... third degree.
The Prof's lecture / on the fourth dimension... she forgets the time.
On his graduation — a CD of Beethoven's 5th.
Gifted composer — each note found as if / by a sixth sense.
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6 comments:
This was a delightful series and I'm thinking "gifts" is the main theme as well as numbers.
'The Prof's lecture
on the fourth dimension...
she forgets the time.' - I very much like this.
this is in my language :)
Truly multi-dimensional!:)
yes a good series
john
increasing numbers are obvious but there's also a sense of time... and of course gifts
Janice: You have correctly identified the two major themes. Thank you.
Andrew: Now that you mention it, this rengay was tailor written for you!
Borut: Yes, thank you.
John: Thanks.
Polona: Very good. I hadn't spotted the time theme (I have just added it to the worksheet). Thank you very much!
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