2008-06-17

Rengay Through the Seasons #42 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 15-21, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

A hermit watches / drops splash on the surface — koi's pond.
Out in an evening drizzle — we stop for fish and chips.
Potato patch — the sound of pitter-patter / on each leaf.


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7 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

Yes, I can distinctly hear this.

Pamela said...

all so much more soothing than a drippy faucet ...or is that coming ?

John McDonald said...

nice
john

Borut said...

And of P's in every second line!?:)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good stuff - glad I can see it now! :)

polona said...

an all too familiar sound ;-)

Masago said...

Janice: Thanks.

Pamela: Hey, great idea... ;-)

John: Thanks.

Borut: Very observant (but not intended). :-)

Andrew: Thank you!

Polona: Gotcha. :-) Thanks.