2008-06-16

Rengay Through the Seasons #42 [1-2]

by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 15-21, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)

A hermit watches / drops splash on the surface — koi's pond.
Out in an evening drizzle — we stop for fish and chips.


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7 comments:

Borut said...

Let's start fishing... For the central theme!?:)

John McDonald said...

more interesting
john

jem said...

Interesting theme developing - the meeting point of fish and rain. There is a warm feeling in both despite the weather, the sense of home in the koi's pond, and the welcome warmth of the food in the second.

haiku-shelf said...

i enjoyed it to read theses verses!

very good the link and the shift!

Janice Thomson said...

Or it could be about water and aquatic animals as a sub-theme. An intriguing start.

polona said...

certainly a wet start... and i've had more than enough of rain already :)
not of your verses, though

Masago said...

Borut: Hmmm...

John: Thanks.

Jem: Thank you, you are very warm. :-)

HS: Thank you.

Janice: You are warm too.

Polona: :-) Yes, there has been a lot rain in these parts. Thanks.