by Masago: Rengay #42 (Jun 15-21, 2008), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
A hermit watches / drops splash on the surface — koi's pond.
Out in an evening drizzle — we stop for fish and chips.
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7 comments:
Let's start fishing... For the central theme!?:)
more interesting
john
Interesting theme developing - the meeting point of fish and rain. There is a warm feeling in both despite the weather, the sense of home in the koi's pond, and the welcome warmth of the food in the second.
i enjoyed it to read theses verses!
very good the link and the shift!
Or it could be about water and aquatic animals as a sub-theme. An intriguing start.
certainly a wet start... and i've had more than enough of rain already :)
not of your verses, though
Borut: Hmmm...
John: Thanks.
Jem: Thank you, you are very warm. :-)
HS: Thank you.
Janice: You are warm too.
Polona: :-) Yes, there has been a lot rain in these parts. Thanks.
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