2008-07-22

Rengay Through the Seasons #47 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #47 (Jul 20-26, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

A gray cloud / drifts into the dirt — rain puddle.
A new neighbour moves in — the gopher pops down its hole.
Cuckoo, cuckoo — stillness returns to this / hot afternoon.


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5 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I can really relate to this - it's been so hot here! (cooled down tonight, though)

John McDonald said...

good one
john

Masago said...

Andrew: Ah, thankfully, eh?

John: Thanks.

polona said...

a clock or a bird?
doesn't really matter, it's a goodie :)

Masago said...

Polona: Thanks... I was actually thinking of the bird in the clock (we don't have that species here, too cold?) but I can see the real bird would also fit.