by Masago: Rengay #47 (Jul 20-26, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
A gray cloud / drifts into the dirt — rain puddle.
A new neighbour moves in — the gopher pops down its hole.
Cuckoo, cuckoo — stillness returns to this / hot afternoon.
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4 comments:
I can really relate to this - it's been so hot here! (cooled down tonight, though)
Andrew: Ah, thankfully, eh?
John: Thanks.
a clock or a bird?
doesn't really matter, it's a goodie :)
Polona: Thanks... I was actually thinking of the bird in the clock (we don't have that species here, too cold?) but I can see the real bird would also fit.
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