by Masago: Rengay #47 (Jul 20-26, 2008), Verse 1 (of 6)
A gray cloud / drifts into the dirt — rain puddle.
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About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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7 comments:
clouds into dirt - I like that!
They come down anyway, one way or another...!:) The life-giving clouds...
great start
john
that's a great opener...
but i wish those clouds would go away from here for a while... they're tedious!
Andrew: Thank you. :-)
Borut: :-) So true!
John: Thank you laddy!
Polona: *smile* We have some more expected to come here tomorrow.
Oh that's a well-crafted verse!
Excellent Vaughn
Janice: Thank you!
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