by Masago: Rengay #49 (Aug 3-9, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)
The wipers almost / clean off the windshield — bugs rest in pieces.
Pansies from her garden — plated between panes.
Two slices / of fresh deli rye — watercress.
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8 comments:
this theme is interesting
The world is an endless mystery, Amerindian seers say... Deli rye and water cress!?:) I had to consult the dictionary. Water cress even sounds like the Slovenian 'vodna kresha'... And, yet, one way or another, I have no idea how the living being referred to, I suppose it must be a living being, looks like... A true jigsaw puzzle... Waiting for the next piece!:)
mysterious
john
a andwich?
Andrew: Thanks.
Borut: I'd like some vodna kreshna...
John: Thanks.
Polona: An 'andwich'?
definitely trapped ..
*which could either mean the subject of your rengay, or my imagination.
oops, somebody must have been hungry and eaten the "s".
of course i meant sandwich
Pamela: very close. :-)
Polona: Ah.
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