by Gary Gay (gg) and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #48 (Aug 24-30, 2008) Verses 1-3 (of 6):
Summer thunder — fireflies blink among / the tall corn. /gg
Corndogs in each hand — we wade through the crowd. /vs
From the top / of the ferris wheel — so many stars. /gg
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wonderful
john
Good ole star lore!:)
This one is great. A real sense of space and dimension, and the phrase 'ferris wheel' is always so poetic.
(apologies for lumping you in with the U.S. in my comment yesterday - I need to read peoples bio's more thoroughly and remember that your continent has many countries on it!)
The stars would definitely be in my head at that height - love the layering in this.
i love the layers in this one...
oh, but i see janice just said the same...
Thank you everyone, on behalf of Gary.
JEM: No problem. :-)
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