by Gary Gay (gg) and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #48 (Aug 24-30, 2008) Verses 1-5 (of 6):
Summer thunder — fireflies blink among / the tall corn. /gg
Corndogs in each hand — we wade through the crowd. /vs
From the top / of the ferris wheel — so many stars. /gg
Up-turned bike — a ladybug on a spoke / of the spinning wheel. /vs
Between the fence slats — a daisy finds the sun. /gg
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6 comments:
Spinning wheel and sun between the slats... Super!:)
enjoying this
john
another wonderful image!
Yes this leaves a delightful image in the mind!
Thank you all, on behalf of Gary!
I like this. Very strong images come to mind. It makes me think how we all need to make the most of every little patch of sunshine we can find.
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