2009-03-12

Renhai Reflections 86: Pilgrim


Pilgrim

A Renhai by Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Frozen pond —
a faint figure approaches
through the fog. /vs

Each pattern glitters — /vs
a name in the frosted window. /vj

Misty eyed
she bids farewell —
fading moon. /vj

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0124.htm

[This Renhai was written with Dr. Vidur Jyoti who lives in India.]

10 comments:

Devika said...

Lovely set, Masago
Nice to see the Indian collaboration :)

All three are good, the first especially was striking for the title..

and the last -- a very poetic imagery :)

wishes
devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice!

Dalloway said...

very good

John McDonald said...

enjoyed as usual
john

polona said...

a secret romance?
enjoyed this

Janice Thomson said...

These are wonderful verses - the imagery so sharp.

Borut said...

A perfect image of Maya!:)

Pamela said...

beautiful --

Masago said...

Thank you all on behalf of Vidur and me.

jem said...

Beautiful and wistful throughout. And (forgive my stereotypes) not what I might have expected from Indian haiku with the cool / cold images.