2009-03-15

Renhai Reflections 87: An Encounter


An Encounter

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

The boy runs ahead,
pulling me by a long string —
I soar up-up-up... /vs

A violet friend comes near - /vs
we dive and glide together. /zh.r

Circling each other,
getting dangerously close —
down... down-down... /zh.r

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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0126.htm

[This Renhai is another in the "another's perspective" style and was written for young readers.]

10 comments:

Devika said...

Enjoyed this one, Masago

Very playful lyrics

wishes,
devika

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like the ending!

Borut said...

A lovely story of the ups and downs for young and old!:)

jem said...

Although this was written for younger readers it has much to offer older ones too. I like the emotion each verse carries.

John McDonald said...

a delight
john

get zapped said...

I enjoyed the ride...

Pamela said...

love it love it.
We're heading to the beach Saturday - Kite country.
And I'll think about this when we are dug into the sand, holding on

polona said...

cute on a superficial level
and much deeper if one cares to think

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Pamela, now that'll be fun!

Polona, now that you mention it, I see what you mean!

Janice Thomson said...

This is awesome you two! What a delight to read.