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2009-07-05
Renhai Reflections 121: In the Thick of It
In the Thick of It
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Faint figures
sway mutely before me —
thoughts thicken. /jt
Earth and sky joined together — /jt
the sun, but a distant memory. /vs
Only the sound
of small lapping waves, and...
a muffled horn. /vs
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8 comments:
The title and the first two seemed to suggest it was still winter there :)
the last is very familiar,
enjoyable series, Masago and Janice
wishes,
devika
Mi fermas okulojn ekvidi de vidajo belecon... kaj mi dormas kaj dormas kaj dormas. Tre ensorbanta :)
enjoyed
john
Love this one! :)
thoughts thicken....
Thank you all!
Ričardas, Dankon por viaj bonaj komentoj!
Sounds great! The f in line one and in the final, these double alliteration in the first part, these s in the middle - and the rhythmn of the third ...
I could get the feeling.
Best wishes
Ralf
That's just how it is when the sea mists roll in. You feel disorientated and a little scared, and cold, but somehow it's worth experiencing just to see things look so different.
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