2009-07-05

Renhai Reflections 121: In the Thick of It


In the Thick of It

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Faint figures
sway mutely before me —
thoughts thicken. /jt

Earth and sky joined together — /jt
the sun, but a distant memory. /vs

Only the sound
of small lapping waves, and...
a muffled horn. /vs

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8 comments:

Devika said...

The title and the first two seemed to suggest it was still winter there :)

the last is very familiar,

enjoyable series, Masago and Janice

wishes,
devika

Ričardas said...

Mi fermas okulojn ekvidi de vidajo belecon... kaj mi dormas kaj dormas kaj dormas. Tre ensorbanta :)

John McDonald said...

enjoyed
john

Irene said...

Love this one! :)

Pamela said...

thoughts thicken....

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Ričardas, Dankon por viaj bonaj komentoj!

RBroeker said...

Sounds great! The f in line one and in the final, these double alliteration in the first part, these s in the middle - and the rhythmn of the third ...

I could get the feeling.

Best wishes
Ralf

jem said...

That's just how it is when the sea mists roll in. You feel disorientated and a little scared, and cold, but somehow it's worth experiencing just to see things look so different.